Friday, May 2, 2008

Ky Derby-inspired Haiku

bold sunlit tulips,
"bourbon on the rocks" breezes,
muddied horse parade

thundering horses,
cacophony of voices,
grey silent stratus

squeaky old porch swing
best seat for contemplation
Derby's on t.v.

1 comment:

Bob Lenning said...

thundering ... cacophony ... silent

What a great image! You make us 'see' with our ears! Those three lines are certainly my favorites. Very well crafted, I think.