Thursday, August 7, 2008

My first haiku

wisps of pure white
track the infinite blue
early morning sky


Bob Lenning said...

This is a great image Dick. What I really like is that you can read the 3rd line straight-on from the 2nd, or you can read it as a separate phrase. Each makes perfect sense, and thats a cool twist. The word 'track' tells me just the kind of clouds that you saw.

Susan R said...

Dick- Your first!? A wonderful beginning. The images are clearly made.